Sketching an Ad for a Game-Changer

I'm on the Board of Heartbeat International, and Heartbeat has developed new software ("Next Level") that (soon) will allow clients at pregnancy medical centers to see the sonograms of their unborn children on their phones! I think that this could be a game-changer: even boyfriends, family and friends who don't see the ultrasound at the clinic can meet this child. So I sketched out an ad that I thought might go on websites like Christianity Today's. Take a look and let me know what you think -- christopherhumphrey15@gmail.com. (Remember: this is a concept, not a finished product.)